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awesome thanks for the tip, but that's only the rising action. this might be the cover of the book. Then you can see danny rolen on the top.

DO YOU THINK THIS IS A GOOD STORY TO BEGIN WITH?




Chapter 2



I woke up at 7:00 like always then I said,” I need to take a shower!” So I got out of bed and then I went in the shower and then I dressed my self and ate some breakfast for 5 minutes. Then Shelly and I drove to school. I hate it when my sister puts in rap music in the radio and it annoys me like everyone looks at me in school like I might be a thug or something like that. Shelly dropped me off and I got my scooter out the trunk. Then I was walking inside, Mountain View Elementary, I walked my scooter and I went to my classroom and set my backpack down in room 23. So I went to the playground and simply popped in my mind, ”Homework!” I accidentally left my homework at my house! Darn it, but I’ll just have to face the music ,but my teacher’s yelling sounds like sawing logs at a mill, So I climbed the playground I went on the big boy one just kidding I’m in 5th grade of course I’m going to be on the big boy one. So I climbed to the tallest ladder there and I was just standing there let everything past through my mind then I heard a screaming calling my name but it’s in clicks but I can still hear words and sounds nothing like English and it was like blobs slammed to a wall but words are coming out. Then my friend calls me and his name is, Blake, he’s really chubby and he’s tall at the same time and he usually stays at his house almost everyday. Then my other friend, Stan, Him and I are exactly the same we do the same stuff together but sometimes he’s really annoying, My other friend should be coming but he’s always late but his name is, Rob, and he sleeps in school but he’s still smart and he’s very skinny like a pencil and he’s cool.
The bell rings so I ran to the classroom and everyone got in a line and our teacher ,Miss Tiller, let us all inside then we had to do our warm-up it’s boring so I’m not going to get in the details so It’s morning recess and it’s 10:45 and we got in line and walked to the playground and played on the playground then the bell rang again. So I went back in the class and then skip boring parts, it was 12:30 and then I had lunch then I had recess again .Then I walked home and I found something astonishing when I opened the door.










Chapter 3

The baby was a wake, my grandma, ova, and Gabby was awake so I was mad because she will start crying when I do my homework. I turned the TV on and I started my homework then I was struggling on my homework but still it was kinda easy then my baby starts crying I was really annoyed so I got a letter from my teacher and it said,

You need to do good in your homework


What! What I got all of them right at the last test but I got 15 wrong on my homework Then my mom came home around 6 :30 then she told me that Uncle Jack went missing and I was amazed but same I don’t care.
Then my Mom told me that we we’re going to the mountains so I was really excited then I went back to work on my homework. Then tomorrow my Mom woke me up in 6 o’clock I was so excited then Shelly is still sleeping so I got a mister and I sprayed it all on her face and then boom! Shelly got so mad then I told her we we’re going to the mountains then she got excited but she was still sleepy then we got pillows and let Gabby sleep and we went on the road! We where watching a movie in the car. Then we stopped at a gas station I saw the gas prices are high! Then my dad got really angry then we went back on the road then I was scared when we were going up the mountain because there was no more road. Then we got out of the car and went on top of the mountain and I just stepped on a rock, violently, then I stood up and I said, ”I’m the king of the world!” Then I heard a echo and then we set up the camp tent then I saw a flare in my dad’s bag and I took it because it look cool. Then It was already night so I took a shower (it felt weird.) then I went to sleep.







Chapter 4
The disaster
Then I woke up really early and I went outside then the winds were weird not like yesterday then I went to explore the campsite then I saw this huge tree then I saw the dull grey sky then I saw a tornado coming at me! Then I started screaming, ”Ahhhhh!” I felt my body I felt like I was in a blender and my body was whooping and whirling around then I saw the view below me it looked like 1,000 feet was below me looked like I was flying! Then I saw the mountain where my family was on then I was still floating in the air and then I was so close to a mountain then I was aware that it was right there then the tornado slammed me to the side of the mountain then there was 5 rocks clinging on the side and I only grabbed onto one then I used all my strength but I couldn’t reach up to the second rock but with the adrenaline I looked down then sharp rocks and wild animals down there. Then I tried again ,”Ahhhh, *Grunt* !” “Ahhhhhhhh!” Got it! Then I got to third one then the fourth one then the last one. I climbed up and then I saw the amazing mountain view I saw the mountain that my family was on. Then there was way more trees on this mountain then I saw the sides of the mountains and it was all rugged and sharp rocks jagged everywhere and then I started getting worried and then I started walking around then I started walking around in circles think about my future, ”What is going to happen to me?” ”Will they get me?” “Will I survive?” “How will I get food?” “Will my family be worried about me?” Then I started getting really worried then I’m thinking in my mind “I’m hungry.”




Chapter 5
Starving
Then I was really hungry I was thinking how am I going to eat What am I going to eat a squirrel or something and I am so hungry I could eat a horse ,literally.

Nice I will check it out.

No i wanted to, i heard it wasn't too good though.

How do I find your comics?

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Thank you Dr. Crimson. For starters where are all the ladies at? lol

My mom got us the Special Editions, she'll be home around 5:30 or 6.

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