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This Darkness Still

You asked me
Was it worth it

Not to me it never did

In this life I never could
find my way

I was always looking
for a way out

Why would you let me in

After all the things I have done
After all the places I have been

And still you call
You always knew
I would fall
Were you still there for me

What else would I see

What else is there left

The past is the key
to the future

But I could not
understand in time

There was nothing left of me

You said there was
and I went on

To live this life anew

Still I cannot forget
the blood on my hands
A life forsaken
And when someone
talks about dreams
it is a nightmare to me

You ask
Will I do it again
Time will tell
If I ever will
Until then
I am living in darkness still
You!
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  • +1 raves
    Zozo 2 days ago
    Zozo
    WOW! Beautiful, Tommy!
  • +1 raves
    whiskey November 13, 2009 14:28:31
    whiskey
    go man sing it out 2 the world
  • +1 raves
    lilttleme November 12, 2009 01:06:36
    lilttleme
    wow amazing poem very emotional I could feel the emotions
  • Яëv.Ƿöηηÿ.Ƿööm.ÄgηösᎿĭç
    I've been in that mind set before. Cool work man!!
  • +2 raves
    red hulk November 07, 2009 06:14:37
    red hulk
    A superb and excellent poem Tommy are you all right.
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    Tommy T... red hulk November 07, 2009 06:21:37
    Tommy Trend
    the title came to me on the night of the 4th. I didn't feel like writing a poem. I figured if I was meant to write it I would remember the next day. Well I did remember and the Fort Hood shootings happened yesterday. so I figured I would write the poem. this came out. I'm glad you like it though it was born of such tragedy.
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    red hulk Tommy T... November 07, 2009 06:50:33
    red hulk
    Oh I see and a very nice dedication to our soldiers that died at fort hood.
  • +2 raves
    rr lyrae November 06, 2009 16:58:57
    rr lyrae
    hands of blood,darkness....
    where we all live, I guess
    I hope not.
  • +2 / -1 raves
    daylight November 06, 2009 07:55:46 (edited)
    daylight
    Good :)
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    e.V.(♥Q... daylight November 07, 2009 19:40:40
    e.V.(♥Queen of Doom♥)
    Tommy *is* a Christian - he is a Catholic. If i were you I'd pray for guidance for your own actions since what is the point of converting Christians to Christianity? :-(
    You don't know about his situation. He'sa poet.

    God made the light AND the dark. Go read Genesis and shhhhhh....
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    daylight e.V.(♥Q... November 07, 2009 20:26:16
    daylight
    ok

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Tommy Trend

Tommy Trend

San Diego, CA, US

May 03, 2007 01:45:59

I need a soda =P

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