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Why can't this be real??

“I am looking for Love. Not the real thing, just something that will get me through the cold lonely nights.”

He looks at me like I am crazy “What does that mean?”

"I am looking for a warm embrace, whether it is empty or full of life and all it has offer. I am looking for a feeling, synthetic or real, just a feeling.”

He squints his eyes “Do you even listen to your thoughts before you let them flood out of your mouth?”

"I listen just fine. But that is what I want. I need that. Can I get that from you? Or do I need to attain that else where?"

He sighs, “Why won’t you just let this be real?”

"Because nothing is real. We live in a world full of fantasy, false promises and dreams. Let’s just call a spade a spade. You don’t love me, you don’t know me. Let’s just pretend that we love each other and call it a day."

He lifts his eyes and keeps his head down. “But I am not pretending”




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  • Rubyzandra 1 hour ago
    Rubyzandra
    Our heads dictate our fantasies, our ears validate promises, and our heart carries out our dreams. The spade is called perseption which is the reality of love and happiness we all want to attain which should never depend on another, but come from the soul within. God gave us bodies equipped to know our needs when our minds can't descern the truth. And the body doesn't care what is behind its pleasure. Only that it exists and is satisfied one way or another. Real or fantasy, it works both ways.
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    Merna November 02, 2009 17:26:28 (edited)
    Merna
    it's not real because:

    boys are immature guys are jerks men are rare!
    great writing btw :)
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    zcberry March 10, 2009 20:09:09
    zcberry
    Can you say have you ever thought about being an author? You have a great story to tell, WRITE IT!!!
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    The Rock March 10, 2009 01:45:06
    The Rock
    It sounds like everyday life in this world. this is a good story, It hits close to home.
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    Adorkable January 18, 2009 01:51:28
    Adorkable
    Awe. Neat! Is this your story in your life? Or is this story actually in a novel? Which ever it is, its sweet. Great concept. And yeah, this can be a real thing.
  • Unmista... Adorkable January 18, 2009 01:53:34
    Unmistakably Liz
    It's from my head....
    Just random thoughts....
  • Linda January 17, 2009 19:56:20
    Linda
    this is a great story and I dont know if its real or not but if its something from your imagination like you like writing short storys then you have some great talent.
  • Unmista... Linda January 18, 2009 01:59:04
    Unmistakably Liz
    THANK YOU!!!
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    Linda Unmista... January 18, 2009 02:35:25
    Linda
    your welcome
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    ɹǝsɐɥɔpuıʍ January 15, 2009 14:54:16
    ɹǝsɐɥɔpuıʍ
    stopping searching ... iam there...LOL


    Nice writing...cool
  • Unmista... ɹǝsɐɥɔpuıʍ January 18, 2009 01:59:17
    Unmistakably Liz
    THANK YOU!!!
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    e.V.(♥Queen of Doom♥) January 14, 2009 15:37:34
    e.V.(♥Queen of Doom♥)
    Nice writing!

    oh - and, um, ;) if you don't want him, I could probably take him. Assuming he is, um :) real.
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    Unmista... e.V.(♥Q... January 18, 2009 01:54:02
    Unmistakably Liz
    No he isn't real... LOL
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    e.V.(♥Q... Unmista... January 18, 2009 02:32:56
    e.V.(♥Queen of Doom♥)
    :D... Just checking! XD
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    Socrates (The Gadfly) January 14, 2009 09:12:48
    Socrates (The Gadfly)
    now.. that is good writting ... honest, cutting, and possibly tragic in the space of a couple of paragraphs .. makes me want to read more ...
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    ZarDoZ69 January 13, 2009 21:32:42
    ZarDoZ69
    I Kike This Lil Story...
    Is This Some Thing That Has Happened In Your Life Or Is It A Product Of Your Fertile
    Imagination?
    Either Way It Would Make A Good Story,TV Show Or Movie...
    P.S:What City/State Do You Live In?
    Peace Out:ZarDoZ69...
  • Unmista... ZarDoZ69 January 18, 2009 01:54:16
    Unmistakably Liz
    It's from my head....
    Just random thoughts....
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    Pilot Bill January 13, 2009 21:18:02
    Pilot Bill
    moderated...
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    Dave Sawyer ♥ Child of God ♥ January 13, 2009 20:46:47
    Dave Sawyer ♥ Child of God ♥
    If I didn't want and believe in the real thing, I would have gotten a dog for companionship long ago.

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November 20, 2007 16:07:25

is watching south park, even though she really needs to shower and sleep.

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