Nice writing!
oh - and, um, ;) if you don't want him, I could probably take him. Assuming he is, um :) real.
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Why can't this be real??
- January 13, 2009 20:12:19
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“I am looking for Love. Not the real thing, just something that will get me through the cold lonely nights.”
He looks at me like I am crazy “What does that mean?”
"I am looking for a warm embrace, whether it is empty or full of life and all it has offer. I am looking for a feeling, synthetic or real, just a feeling.”
He squints his eyes “Do you even listen to your thoughts before you let them flood out of your mouth?”
"I listen just fine. But that is what I want. I need that. Can I get that from you? Or do I need to attain that else where?"
He sighs, “Why won’t you just let this be real?”
"Because nothing is real. We live in a world full of fantasy, false promises and dreams. Let’s just call a spade a spade. You don’t love me, you don’t know me. Let’s just pretend that we love each other and call it a day."
He lifts his eyes and keeps his head down. “But I am not pretending”
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He looks at me like I am crazy “What does that mean?”
"I am looking for a warm embrace, whether it is empty or full of life and all it has offer. I am looking for a feeling, synthetic or real, just a feeling.”
He squints his eyes “Do you even listen to your thoughts before you let them flood out of your mouth?”
"I listen just fine. But that is what I want. I need that. Can I get that from you? Or do I need to attain that else where?"
He sighs, “Why won’t you just let this be real?”
"Because nothing is real. We live in a world full of fantasy, false promises and dreams. Let’s just call a spade a spade. You don’t love me, you don’t know me. Let’s just pretend that we love each other and call it a day."
He lifts his eyes and keeps his head down. “But I am not pretending”
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boys are immature guys are jerks men are rare!
great writing btw :)
Just random thoughts....
Nice writing...cool
oh - and, um, ;) if you don't want him, I could probably take him. Assuming he is, um :) real.
Is This Some Thing That Has Happened In Your Life Or Is It A Product Of Your Fertile
Imagination?
Either Way It Would Make A Good Story,TV Show Or Movie...
P.S:What City/State Do You Live In?
Peace Out:ZarDoZ69...
Just random thoughts....