So what do you think of my poem!?
JohnCenaLover#33
2011/03/22 19:37:37
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My Cat is a Devil
When I come home from school
I see my cat
she knows I lover her like a baby.
When I walk up to her
with a smile,
she gives me an evil stare.
She is a evil monster.
My joy fills with lost hope
like a boy loosing his little puppy.
But she has a spark, a spark
of joy in her eye.
When she finally comes to me,
and gives me a great meow,
I smile and pet her for a while.
When this day ends I’ll
always know, that the next
day the same thing will
happen again and again.
By: Alissa Ward march.20th.2011
When I come home from school
I see my cat
she knows I lover her like a baby.
When I walk up to her
with a smile,
she gives me an evil stare.
She is a evil monster.
My joy fills with lost hope
like a boy loosing his little puppy.
But she has a spark, a spark
of joy in her eye.
Her spark is a shooting star flying
through the night sky. When she finally comes to me,
and gives me a great meow,
I smile and pet her for a while.
When this day ends I’ll
always know, that the next
day the same thing will
happen again and again.
By: Alissa Ward march.20th.2011
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- merlinskiss 2011/03/24 02:12:10well this is wht i think..........(leave a coment)
+1My old cat is nothing like that. He is my bud and best friend, has been for years. He is more like a loving dog than anything else. And he is now 20 years young...reply -
+2nice to hear...so u liked my poem?reply
- merlins... JohnCen... 2011/03/24 15:19:25+1Yep, it fits some cats.reply
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ahahaha mine deffentally!reply
- keeper 2011/03/23 00:15:05GREAT! :)+1I like it a bunch... just keep letting your feelings guide your pen~~ ;o)reply
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+1ok willz! :Dreply
- keeper JohnCen... 2011/03/24 00:57:03+1;Dreply
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+1ya.....reply
