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Goodbye Forever
- July 01, 2009 18:12:31
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Falling fast, breaking the dawn,
I look into his eyes and he makes a sound ''Goodbye Forever''.
I take his hand, my tears dry as sand
falling like a leaky faucet.
This is what i wanted
this is what i needed
''Goodbye Forever.'' I whispered coming close to his lips
then hitting the ground.
I look into his eyes and he makes a sound ''Goodbye Forever''.
I take his hand, my tears dry as sand
falling like a leaky faucet.
This is what i wanted
this is what i needed
''Goodbye Forever.'' I whispered coming close to his lips
then hitting the ground.
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+2 raves charelle_luv_edwardcullen July 01, 2009 18:20:42
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- +1 raves angelpoet17 August 28, 2009 21:33:53
awesome. - +1 raves Juli July 12, 2009 06:18:31
That's wonderful! - +1 raves Gramma Lil July 01, 2009 20:12:02
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Thanks - +2 raves charelle_luv_edwardcullen July 01, 2009 18:20:42
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