Ever write a depressing poem?

they are here
http://webstation19.8k.com/po...

ive written alot,though saddly ive lost my poem book -_-

I'm one of those people who when life gives you lemons, you make lemonade and keep on trucking.

All of my poems are depressing.

I wrote it about a guy named Tim who used to beat my mom





Evil, undead, glowing bright,

Tearing crazily through the night,

Like a blazing comet in flight,

The Horrible Hound from Hell.



Devouring positive away,

This dog does not want to play.

It has emerged from a fiery fray,

The Horrible Hound from Hell.



It will control you,

It will posses you,

It will destroy you,

The Horrible Hound from Hell.



Don’t mistake it,

It will fake it,

Your mind, it will take it,

The Horrible Hound from Hell.



Its name is not Kim,

Its name is not Jim,

Its dumb name is Tim,

The Horrible Hound from Hell.

Not so much a poem, but I've written depressing lyrics. Some use the word "dark".

Oh how I want to go down 6 feet and be free,
I'll be away from this world and the hurt it's caused me.
So it's settled, I'll force a bullet right into my heart,
I'll end all the pain from the place it had to start.
I'll be in bliss and euphoria and maybe feel okay,
"I was too weak to go on", I'll make sure my note will say.
I'm sorry for the confusion, you raised me right mom,
It was me who chose to do this, so please try to stay calm.
I know this is hard for you; seeing me in crimson,
But one day you'll realize that this was my decision.
I'm laying down to rest from this chaos that killed me,
I hate to leave you like this but it's how it had to be.
So as my coffin closes and the people cry,
I thank all the angels they allowed me to die.

I made this up for myself. =)

most of my poems are depressing because I can write only when I am depressive , I have not written any poem when I was happy .

yeah im the same way

Time is a cancer
Ticking like an obscene clock
With no direction

Nice Haiku.

Thanks

I wrote this one when I was 9.

Squishy squashy things
I think they are called maggots
Aren't they sickening?

lol, that's a good one

Thanks. I got an "A" on it. Tho, I remember my teacher did tell me it was gross.

Whenever I write a poem or story its about the character fighting or the meaning to be not to give up at all. I may have been a tad sad at one point or another but never have I been depressed, all I know at this point is to keep fighting.

LOST
by: Ariell Cranor


She sits in the rain;
Staying to stare at the stone,
Feeling so alone.

She thinks quietly;
Remebering better days
As she cries softly.

They loved eachother.
How could life be so unfair?
How could this happen?

One beer too many.
Just one gun left unloaded.
One unknowing shot.

Some men are murdered.
Some men die of an illness.
And some kill themselves.

Some men shoot to die.
He shot thinking it was safe.
He didn't want to die.

No doubt he was drunk.
Drunk men do not check chambers.
They don't inspect guns.

It should have been safe.
She always unloaded it.
How could she forget?

Now she blames herself.
She believes it's all her fault
And she always will.

Can't turn back the clock.
Too late to save what we lost.
This can't be undone.



I wrote this after watching my mother cry over my dead step dad's grave a couple years ago. he died in 2004 after he shot himself in the temple in front of my mother, my lil brother, and I.

How is your little brother now ?

he was recently trasfered from his group home to a mental hospital cuz he was tlking about suicide and he tried it.

How old is he ? How was he before he witnessed this death ?

13 with the mind of like an 8year old. He's mentally handicapped and we were pretty young when we witnessed it so it's hard to compare it.

Generally mentally handicapped people are not able to commit suicide , if he tried that he might not be that handicapped ? But poor boy , he has a whole to suffer . I am sorry . But you must look into the future not to the past . Put your past bad memories in a box & put it into a deep drawer in your mental attic . What ever enters in your mental attic , it stays there , you can't make it out you but have an option not to open it ever .

he has a chemical imbalance, mild (high-functioning) autism, adhd, and theyre starting to think he may be bipolar

My dad (my biological one) killed himself when I was four after he and my mom had a huge argument. He left somewhere and three or four days later we got a call saying that his body had been found, I don't remember where. They said he had suffocated himself by duct taping a bag over his head. :l I'm going to quote a movie: "I feel for you, man." I think some hippie off a Disney movie said that.

I wrote a depressing story in one of my history classes and got sent to the counseling office. I had brutal story problems in my physics class and the whole class was terrified of me. I can't write poetry, so...

I would like to read it . I did some kinda the same thing when I was 15 :))

I don't have any of them on my computer. What did you do?

The English teacher asked us to create stories . And my story began quite normal & when it was some where like " and he began to cut his nails , his nails began to bleed .." she stopped me :))

In my history class, the girl murdered like 7 people, including her family. In my physics class, everyone died from a serial killer. In one of them, a corpse got raped, but the teacher took that part out.

I can understand him very well . Mine looks angelic besides this..

Rooftop Nights
By: Estrella Gonzales

She sat upon the shabby rooftop,
of her dull apartment building.
She tried to figure out why,
she had these sort of feelings.
She gazed upon the city lights,
It was a sweet soft glow.
Reminded her of a past,
And the dreams she lost long ago.
A tear trickled down her face
A memory that was fading
And all this time she had been waiting,
To escape this horrible place
Time was slipping through her fingers
She had no place to go
So she stood up on the edge
And she flew all the way home…

(I write tons of poems and alot of them are sad)

no

Here is a short one i wrote although i have a few others....

her demise

She has lost a lot of friends and all her inspiration
maybe she should contract her own assassination
would that be assisted suicide or murder for hire
so if she said she didn't kill herself would that make her a liar
guess it doesn't matter cuz no one would really care
just another mystery to solve about the how, when , and where
lets not forget the motive, why did she let this life go
if you don't know by now, then I guess you may never know

Never did. Probably never will it's not my thing.

I write a lot of them. But I'm rarely depressed. Lol

not my thing...