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Can you finish this other poem I started in the same style I stared with?

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Here's my continuation...
I can't think of anything.
None of the above
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I was floating through the emptiness
And then I saw a glow
Energy began transforming into mass
Then it began to grow

Curious, I was drawn towards the light
Because I had to know
I sought understanding of the event
As the universe did sow

I waited and I kept a patient vigil
Beholding the ebb and flow
Fascinated by the emerging space....

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  • antiteaparty 2011/02/13 18:59:59
    Here's my continuation...
    antiteaparty
    +5
    I was floating through the emptiness
    And then I saw a glow
    Energy began transforming into mass
    Then it began to grow

    Curious, I was drawn towards the light
    Because I had to know
    I sought understanding of the event
    As the universe did sow

    I waited and I kept a patient vigil
    Beholding the ebb and flow
    Fascinated by the emerging space
    The future began to show

    As I stepped from the past
    Foreseeing the future's escrow
    And to save myself from a fate for all humanity
    I signed on the line below

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  • Nat Turner 2011/03/09 15:05:43
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    Nat Turner
    Then it turned around and peed in your face!
  • strawberry 2011/02/17 01:31:42
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    strawberry
    I waited and I kept a patient vigil
    Beholding the ebb and flow
    Fascinated by the emerging space
    Freed my soul, letting my whole being, toward it go.

    There I learned such secrets to man unknown
    depths of darkness, blinding hues,
    Overpowering senses, Oh! I should have left alone.
    Now apart of all within, linger eternally I do.
  • Ding A Ling B Dead 2011/02/14 06:52:01
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    Ding A Ling B Dead
    I wobbled to and fro :)
  • katy 2011/02/13 22:32:50 (edited)
    Here's my continuation...
    katy
    +2
    I was floating through the emptiness
    And then I saw a glow
    Energy began transforming into mass
    Then it began to grow

    Curious, I was drawn towards the light
    Because I had to know
    I sought understanding of the event
    As the universe did sow

    I waited and I kept a patient vigil
    Beholding the ebb and flow
    Fascinated by the emerging space
    Waiting for the matter to blow!

    I was full of understanding
    With this epiphany I sang
    For my senses overwhelmed me
    I saw the big bang!
  • rwhit98 2011/02/13 21:59:43
    None of the above
    rwhit98
    +1
    I couldn't think of anything until I started reading some of the other posts... now all I can think of is what has already been said.
  • Boris D. 2011/02/13 19:57:32
    Here's my continuation...
    Boris D.
    +2
    ...Then I stubbed my pinky toe.

    The End.
  • Stonecipher 2011/02/13 19:56:09
    Here's my continuation...
    Stonecipher
    +1
    a blank blackboard?
  • Jana~ una chica loca 2011/02/13 19:20:33
    I can't think of anything.
    Jana~ una chica loca
    +1
    Too numb and have a headache, can't think. sorry
  • antiteaparty 2011/02/13 18:59:59
    Here's my continuation...
    antiteaparty
    +5
    I was floating through the emptiness
    And then I saw a glow
    Energy began transforming into mass
    Then it began to grow

    Curious, I was drawn towards the light
    Because I had to know
    I sought understanding of the event
    As the universe did sow

    I waited and I kept a patient vigil
    Beholding the ebb and flow
    Fascinated by the emerging space
    The future began to show

    As I stepped from the past
    Foreseeing the future's escrow
    And to save myself from a fate for all humanity
    I signed on the line below
  • taco antitea... 2011/02/13 19:48:20
    taco
    +3
    nice. :)
  • Ves~Sai... antitea... 2011/02/15 19:35:35
    Ves~Sailor Soldier of PHAET
    I like this!
  • antitea... Ves~Sai... 2011/02/15 20:45:44
    antiteaparty
    +1
    Thank you
  • life's big ? 2011/02/13 17:56:03
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    life's big ?
    +1
    I was floating through the emptiness
    And then I saw a glow
    Energy began transforming into mass
    Then it began to grow

    Curious, I was drawn towards the light
    Because I had to know
    I sought understanding of the event
    As the universe did sow

    I waited and I kept a patient vigil
    Beholding the ebb and flow
    Fascinated by the emerging space so free and agile
    my brain couldn't contemplate it all i though it might blow


    As I watched the stars unfolded
    bright and brilliant blues and reds emerged very slow
    before my eyes a sun I behold-ed
    all this I couldn't fathom and it began to take its tole

    I made up a story to ease my questions
    I made a God I made A foe
    for the god left at night
    then returned in the morning and its glory I bestowed
  • Ray 2011/02/13 16:45:45
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    Ray
    +1
    I gotta smoke more of that blow!
    -----------------------------...
    Jus' kidding. Nice poem.
  • Knight Of Blood 2011/02/13 15:39:22
    None of the above
    Knight Of Blood
    +1
    augh! it sound like science! im gone!
  • JosephCooke7265 2011/02/13 14:46:26
    Here's my continuation...
    JosephCooke7265
    +1
    and then i saw it shiny blue and green,Earth,a great place to visit,but don't stay long its infested with jack ass men
  • PetrifiedElephantPoop 2011/02/13 14:33:32
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    PetrifiedElephantPoop
    +2
    With my soul in tow
  • Lindasmind 2011/02/13 14:17:49
    None of the above
    Lindasmind
    +1
    Have you ever been published?
  • Dark De... Lindasmind 2011/02/13 15:25:53
    Dark Demonic™ ★ The Original SodaHead Guru ★
    +2
    Na, I write mainly for therapeutic reasons. It helps when you can express your inner voice in as many ways as possible. :o)
  • mm 2011/02/13 14:17:10
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    mm
    +3
    And transfixed by the wonders it might bestow

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