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Angels Cry

Kati~Hopelessly In Love~ 2010/11/16 23:05:30
Related Topics: In Love, Years
The Dark Angel cries
At the loss of her Love
At the thought of him gone Forever

When he told her Forever and Always
Oh so long ago
And told her he loved her

But that was many years ago
Centuries have passed since that early fall morning
And that morning seems like yesterday

To the Dark Angel
As her black tears fall
Helpless and hopeless

Knowing the Love of her life
Will never Love her again
And all because of her ''problems''

That he couldnt ''handle''
What ever happened to ''I dont give up. Nor will I ever give up''?
What ever happened to Forever and Always?

I believed in you
You let me down
I forgot the pain you caused me

All for one more year with you
All your pain and hurtful memories
Gone and dead

Just like my heart
The day you gave up
The day you left


I gave my soul to Him
And he let me have you for one more year
With no memories of our past

I regret doing the things I did
I regret ever falling so hard and so fast in love with yu
I regret the pain I caused us both

I'm sorry
I cant go on
This is it

My wings are like night
Dark and huge
With no white left

Im no longer yours
I never have been
Although I wish I was again..........

Goodnight.

You!
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  • Alice and Jasper 2010/11/21 05:24:17
    Alice and Jasper
    +1
    cooly awesome
  • ~*!MCR FOR LIFE=D!*~ 2010/11/21 01:19:36
    ~*!MCR FOR LIFE=D!*~
    +1
    that was rly good
  • .:*:.BrOkEn~AnGeL.:*:. 2010/11/19 18:54:57
    .:*:.BrOkEn~AnGeL.:*:.
    +1
    thats amazin
  • dinoRAWR 2010/11/18 22:57:39
    dinoRAWR
    +1
    amazing
  • I<3CoryLaQuay 2010/11/18 22:29:35
    I<3CoryLaQuay
    +1
    its a good poem
  • Kati~Ho... I<3Cory... 2010/11/18 22:34:31
    Kati~Hopelessly In Love~
    thanks =D
  • I<3Cory... Kati~Ho... 2010/11/18 22:36:10
    I<3CoryLaQuay
    +1
    ur welcome i really understood it
  • Kati~Ho... I<3Cory... 2010/11/18 22:37:41
    Kati~Hopelessly In Love~
    Thanks. Im glad you did... Im katie by the way =D nice to meet you
  • I<3Cory... Kati~Ho... 2010/11/18 22:40:54
    I<3CoryLaQuay
    +1
    nice 2 meet u to
  • Kati~Ho... I<3Cory... 2010/11/18 22:42:28 (edited)
    Kati~Hopelessly In Love~
    ok so whats up?
  • I<3Cory... Kati~Ho... 2010/11/18 22:44:49
    I<3CoryLaQuay
    +1
    well nothin much im just hangin'
  • Kati~Ho... I<3Cory... 2010/11/18 22:47:59
    Kati~Hopelessly In Love~
    lol me too
  • I<3Cory... Kati~Ho... 2010/11/18 22:50:39
  • Kati~Ho... I<3Cory... 2010/11/20 20:56:52
    Kati~Hopelessly In Love~
    thats stupid of her
  • I<3Cory... Kati~Ho... 2010/11/23 00:37:28
    I<3CoryLaQuay
    ikr
  • Valia-chan 2010/11/18 14:09:33
    Valia-chan
    +1
    wow!it's a beautiful poem!!!:)
  • tazzycat 2010/11/18 13:03:27
    tazzycat
    +1
    its beautiful, you have a lovely talent dear and I hope you keep it up.
  • BrianLNichols 2010/11/18 04:59:07
    BrianLNichols
    +1
    Lots of heart, unconditional love
  • Angel of death 2010/11/18 03:07:22
    Angel of death
    +1
    Reminds me of the guy i like he doesen't like me back i just wish him his happyness even if it's not me this make me want 2 cry nice poem 10 out of 5....
  • Kati~Ho... Angel o... 2010/11/18 21:44:30
    Kati~Hopelessly In Love~
    10 out of 5 what? and thank you =D
  • Angel o... Kati~Ho... 2010/11/19 03:40:57
    Angel of death
    +1
    in other words i hella like ur poem...
  • Kati~Ho... Angel o... 2010/11/20 20:57:05
    Kati~Hopelessly In Love~
    lol ahhh thanks!! =D
  • Miz.LeillyDee 2010/11/17 21:17:57 (edited)
    Miz.LeillyDee
    +1
    touching indeed....pierced my very soul
  • Kati~Ho... Miz.Lei... 2010/11/18 00:39:43
    Kati~Hopelessly In Love~
    thanks..... ?
  • Miz.Lei... Kati~Ho... 2010/11/18 00:41:16
    Miz.LeillyDee
    +1
    u wrote that?
    its so perfect lovely...
  • Kati~Ho... Miz.Lei... 2010/11/18 00:46:48
    Kati~Hopelessly In Love~
    Yeah. I write everything.... well except the break up quotes.... ^_^ and thank you
  • Miz.Lei... Kati~Ho... 2010/11/18 00:48:11
    Miz.LeillyDee
    +1
    wud it be alrite if i emailed it to a frend??
  • Kati~Ho... Miz.Lei... 2010/11/18 00:55:33
    Kati~Hopelessly In Love~
    UMMMMM what KIND of friend? You'd have to say Katie Rowland wrote it... ^_^
  • Miz.Lei... Kati~Ho... 2010/11/18 00:57:54
    Miz.LeillyDee
    +1
    m best friend she writes too but only wen she is aimless
    so ur name is katie rowland??
  • Kati~Ho... Miz.Lei... 2010/11/18 01:00:06
    Kati~Hopelessly In Love~
    lol OK... Just give me credit for my work ok? and yep thats my name =D
  • Miz.Lei... Kati~Ho... 2010/11/18 01:06:13
    Miz.LeillyDee
    +1
    sure sure....i hate plagarism anyway i think its the ppl hu came up with it deserves all the credit..and u deserve all the credit for this beautifully written poem....:)
  • Kati~Ho... Miz.Lei... 2010/11/18 01:08:11
    Kati~Hopelessly In Love~
    Yeah me too. Awwwe thank you!!! =D
  • Miz.Lei... Kati~Ho... 2010/11/18 01:13:23
    Miz.LeillyDee
    +1
    anyway the peoms sounds as if it was from an experience...is it?
  • Kati~Ho... Miz.Lei... 2010/11/18 01:19:47
    Kati~Hopelessly In Love~
    +1
    Mostly yes.... My boyfriend and whom I thought was perfect for me in every way possible (human and nonhuman) broke up with my last tuesday.... I really still love him. I always will.... No matter WHO he decides to be with. I just want him happy.
  • Miz.Lei... Kati~Ho... 2010/11/18 01:25:44
    Miz.LeillyDee
    +1
    im sorry...jst remember if u luv smethin let it go if it is truly urs it will cum back...
    "I regret doing the things I did
    I regret ever falling so hard and so fast in love with yu"[ this lines strike me...i've been there but he was just a bunch of lies...i still cant get ova him though.....part of m feels that i will hav him back anytym...im crazy ryt??...
  • Kati~Ho... Miz.Lei... 2010/11/18 01:30:30
    Kati~Hopelessly In Love~
    no. because thats exactly how I feel... although i KNOW it well never happen because he ''fell out of love with me''
  • Miz.Lei... Kati~Ho... 2010/11/18 01:39:08
    Miz.LeillyDee
    +1
    well dis guy i was with promised everything he even said he hated liars but it turned out he lied the whole tym he had a girlfrend olredy....i was in pieces for weeks...nearly cost my soccer team a loss!!..i wasnt pisd off cos he didnt luv me it was cos he lied......
  • Kati~Ho... Miz.Lei... 2010/11/18 01:42:32
    Kati~Hopelessly In Love~
    I can relate.... :'( sucks doesn it? falling in love and finding out almost 6 months later that the person who you THOUGHT loved you and told you he wouldnt leave you ever DID fall out of love with you and DID leave you... I had my doubts... but I got over them BECAUSE I LOVED HIM... I just wish it was enough for him again.. he's already found someone better anyways and my friends keep telling me that he cant DO better then *me*... I know they're trying to cheer me up... but he did find someone who is CLOSER to him and he can actually BE with and the very thought makes me wanna cry till my eyes bleed... I love him so much and I'd give 5-10-15 years of my life to be with him again. I'd give anything to be with him again....
  • Miz.Lei... Kati~Ho... 2010/11/18 01:47:33
    Miz.LeillyDee
    +1
    oooohhhh i knw how that feels i can refeel how i felt when the truth came out lying in bed crying my eyes out m frens thought i was insane...but its blown over a bit i cant help feeling that i was being promised nothin and meant nothin...yet i still want him even though i know i cant.....umm hw old are u anyway..between wat ages that is?
  • Kati~Ho... Miz.Lei... 2010/11/18 01:49:27
    Kati~Hopelessly In Love~
    +1
    im 15.. I'll be 16 in less than 29 days on Dec. 16th =D

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