The Rescue
Elmo~WAWU~Bn-2~
2011/05/06 18:06:29
Every now and then,
We all need to be rescued.
But, from what?
Some need rescue from Greif,
Fear, pain,
Self doubt,
Hard times.
Some need rescue from doubt,
Regret, hurt,
Depression,
Uncertainty.
Some need rescue from broken hearts,
Society's pressure,
Sometimes,
Even themselves.
Some need rescue from the fear,
The fear of being alone in life,
The fear of failing,
The fear of getting hurt.
Some of us need rescue from our past,
Some from our present,
Some from our future.
We all need rescue from insecurities,
Bullying, racism,
Prejudice, stereotypes.
We all need change.
Change from the lies,
Change from the pain.
It is time to let love in.
Be inspired by the freedom to dream big, to achieve your aspirations.
Be inspired by beating the odds, living for today.
Be inspired by music, love, family and friends.
Be inspired be those who are inspired.
Be inspired by inspiration itself.
This is your life. Live it to the full.
Pass up no oportunities.
Never give up.
No matter what anyone else may say,
You are beautiful.
You are strong.
You can do anything you aspire to do.
And the feeling you get when you achieve those aspirations,
Is greater than any other.
So believe in yourself.
Believe in others around you.
Respect them, show them love.
The real kind.
The unconditional kind.
The nonjudgemental kind.
Let your gaurd down and share the love you have to offer.
You will be a better person in doing so.
Thank you :)
It is very uplifting and positive.
The form and content are good, I really like the way you switched from choppy words to full sentences and then back again.
As a free verse poem, this is very good, the first part until the line "It is time to let love in.", is my favorite part as it is more like stanzas.
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Sounds like what a MORmON missionary would first say after you open your door. They couldn't help it. They've been suckered into thinking their working for some god and they gave all their money to their master and their wearing their magic underwear so be nice when you slam the door in their face.
I didn't see your pretty face up there and I'm always looking for an opportunity to bash MORmONS so without reading it I fired away. Dam redheads sorry
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HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA
So cool.
Here, have some sunshine, I'm feleing hippyish these days.
Christ.....did we get married and nobody told me?
You sound like I'm married to you...
Yeah, you were high for the most part.
But winding you up is so much more fun.....and it's my little way of showing I care.
If all our conversation's had taken place in real life and you weren';t so tough, I might have punched you by now.
Flowers might be a better way to show that.
I'm a kitty-cat.....A total pushover.....Soft as gell.
That's me...All the way.
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