New story...wrote it three years ago lmao tell me what u think part 1

Abby was getting ready for her date with Ian(her boyfriend). They were going to Camden to see FOB. That was her fave band. She knew all teh words to their hit song, "This ain't a scene it's an arms race." She took a shower and used strawberry scented shampoo and conditioner. Then she got out and chose to wear a black skull tank-top with thick straps, black khakis, and black converse with pink skulls. Then she went into teh bathroom and took out her hair dye. She was going to dye it black with pink tips. She did and looked at herself in the mirror. She didn't look like herself so to her she looked perfect. She put her hair up in a messy bun. She checked her email one last time before she left. She had 1 new email. It read:
Kassy,
I love you so much. I can't wait until our date tonight. I'll pick you up at 11:00. With lots of L.O.V.E
Yours truly
Ian
Abby was extremely angry.She decided to break it off with him at the concert. So she grabbed purse and left for the hall bar. She saw Ian and put on a fake smile and walked over to him. He saw her and smiled and walked over to her. He kissed her and said, "Hey you ready to go?" "Yea." So they left and she decided to confront him about "Kassy." "Hey Ian who's Kassy?" "Oh she's just a friend" "But I thought yo "loved" her" "Oh well I do as a sister" "Well you go out with your SITER" "No I'm taking her out tonight" The rest of the night she stayed quiet unless she was singing with the band. Then on the car ride home she said, "I'm sorry I guess I overreacted" "Yeah and hey how did you know about her" You sent her email to me by mistake" "Oh sorry you thought I was cheating on you. You know I would never do that" Then they made up and Abby went to her room. She thought she was just being silly. She checked her email and she had 2 new emails. On was from Ian and the other was from her bffl Zoe.