I'll Take You There And Back.

I'm not here to please
I'm here to cease
Every opportunity for me
To see you bleed
I can stop the pain
But I never said I was willing to
Cut the shit and I'll cut the rope around your throat
Ease your way into my soul
And I'll ease your hands from the cuffs
Learn how to kill me
And I'll pull the trigger
Suffocation is an option
But we all know you'll call a doctor
Does it speak to you?
When you're alone in the dark
Can you feel it?
While you start to plumment
Into the dark abyss of my soul
Seak the opportunity to over take me
But you won't find a way to shake me
We're stuck like glue in this shit hole
God won't save us now
Do you know why?
Because you've left his side
Welcome to hell baby
You'll be stuck here for ages
Try to escape and Satan will taze you
Don't open the gates of Hell baby
'Cause you'll miss it
I'll sit back and laugh as you cry
Tears fill your eyes
There's no turning back from this nightmare sweetheart
Because now it's your reality
I'm not here to please
I'm here to cease
Any opportunity for me
To see you bleed
The songs not over yet
Let the drum beat take over your heart
Feel the rhythm of my heart
Take my hand and we'll soar a far
Into the depth of Hell we'll depart
Let's cease the moment for now
And we'll die like Kings in a Solar Eclipse



So I randomly wrote this song I can't really tell you the meaning behind it, or who it's about. I just wanted some opinions on it I'm not really sure if I'm finished with it or not. Nor am I sure if I actually like it, if you want to know what instruments are in it just let me know. Along with how "someone" would sing it too there are breakdowns at certain parts and what not. So leave a comment, and all that fun stuff.