Hi friends would you read this story warning it is a little long, but I would really appreciate it. The story is from my series Interviews From Heaven. Leave a comment and enjoy :)
Silent Bob 2011/03/20 20:44:34
HayleyI never thought dying would hurt so much. Seeing family and friends cry like that. One person equals thousands of tears. I remember my last moments. i was fourteen and I remember loving to play the piano. I always wanted to be an actress or a singer. I was a big dreamer. I always donated my blood to leukemia patients who needed it. I always did community service and got straight A's. I was a parents dream child. I remember when my dad went off to Iraq to fight in the war. i had prepared for this moment, but it hurt so bad. When we got the letter in the mail that he wouldn't be back for another year we all prayed and shared hugs and tears. I remember writing a song for my dad and playing it on television. I remember the first time I actually performed the song was for my cat. She sat there and listened. Then I was walking to school. My mom always lectured me to be careful. I was careful. I let every car pass before I crossed the street and I always stayed in populated areas in case of creepy child molesters. I failed at the one job I had been given. When I was walking I never noticed the old man who lived in the ratty apartments a block away from our school. He must of had twenty dogs, because every time I would walk by I heard barking. I remember it was raining hard and it was starting to snow a little. I remember being curled up in my scarf and hat. I was about to walk by the old man's apartment when someone grabbed me. I screamed and struggled. The person tried to put a foul smelling rag on my mouth but I wouldn't let them. I guess when the person heard footsteps coming towards them they pulled out a knife and stabbed me. I laid there in the snow and rain literally drowning in my blood. I didn't see anyone or hear anything. Eventually I pulled myself up a little bit. My lips were frozen and the atmosphere around me was blank. I started getting warmer. I finally stood up. There was nothing. No people, no houses, nothing. I heard a piano. I heard my song. I felt really warm now. I heard it being played. I was getting too warm and scared. Where was I?
I sat down and put my head on my knees and listened. I hugged my body and just listened. I heard laughter and the voices of my family. A video popped up on the wall. I recognized the video. I was standing there in my little floral dress from when I was about nine. I heard my mom talking.
She was saying, "Okay Hayley are you ready for the surprise?"
The video skipped a little to the part where my dad came in. This video was fake. The first part was at Christmas. That second part never happened. My dad never came home. The scenery started to change. I stood up and almost fell back down. There was now a desert looking place with crumbled buildings. I heard gunshots. I was in the war. I spotted a familiar face. My dad. He was laying on the ground with blood trailing down the wrinkles of his forehead. I realized that it was a video on an envelope. The envelope didn't actually say that he would be back in a year. My mom lied to us. No wonder she was so sad. He had died and it had said so on the letter. I put my hand over my mouth and fell to my knees and started crying. I hadn't noticed the scene had went back to blank again until I was done crying. I leaned up and sniffed. Was I dreaming? Then all of a sudden a white orb formed in the middle of where I was. I walked up to it and looked at it. A picture appeared. It was me laying on the road. I wasn't breathing. I wasn't dreaming either. I was dead. There was crime scene tape all around my body. I heard screams and then my mom appeared. She was screaming and was clearly in pain. I had done this to her! I had caused her to cry like this. The orb acted like a video tape. It fast forward to my school. A memorial was put up. It said, In Loving Memory of Hayley Red. I saw my teachers and friends holding hands and crying. Why were they crying? I did this! I can't believe I did this.
"You didn't do anything." a voice said. I looked around, but of course there was nothing but blankness until the scene changed again. I was on a cloud city place. I saw..an angel? She was sweet looking. She smiled at me and grabbed my hand.
" You are a brave brave girl. She closed her eyes and said something that sent a shock throughout my body. I looked at my back and saw wings. I felt my body shiver and a light halo appeared above my head.
"You are a special girl. You are a special angel. I am sorry to say that you were murdered. You are dead and this is not a dream. This is Heaven and all of us angels welcome you into Heaven. Your mother is very sad yet your soul from Heaven will help her. You were meant to die my sweet child."
She grabbed my other hand.
"God welcomes you as one of his children. Do not be upset. So young, sweet, and precious. You are very brave to have gone through so much and to help so many and still save time for God. We all respect you for that. You are now going to enter and you will never leave. Your family has there destines set for another time. When they do die they will come here to join you. Stay brave my dear."
She let go and led me into the large gates.
That was that. I was dead and I was in Heaven.
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