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Best poem ive ever Written! :)

ok this poem i wrote is basically bout this troubled and confused teenage guy, or maybe his early 20's, little bits and pieces of this is actually based on some people that i know or me...ENJOY! :)

(CAUTION: this may be disturbing to some)

Im so fucking tired
Im so fucking wired
Why arent any of these jobs I need fuckin hiring?

Damn Im so wasted
Wheres that "Will work for money sign" I just pasted?

But hey its all good
How bout I just get ur girlfriend to fuck me in ur pool?

Wat was that bro? You think Im a player?
Hey at least Im maing more dough selling cocaine than and ur $4 per hour paper

Ya I do whatever i want and i get whatever I want
So if i wanted to fuck with ur girlfriend in your bed
we wud be using the 10 boxes of condoms we found in ur crib

I run on hate and marijuana
Hurry and get me my dope
before i fuck up ur face and kick u where it will hurt

I need my pills before i vomit
I need them now i cant handle it

Think im tripping? Tie my shoes
Think im messing? Clean it up

I aint crazy im just creative
I aint mean im just messy
I aint angry im just aggrivated
So theres nothing wrong with me u see
Im just a lil messed up in the head

I dont go for hookers
I go for the lookers
I dont want me no skanks
I'd rather go for the ones down at the bank
Hey wat am i saying? Their all the same
Not like im ready to be tied down anyways

I cant find where i put my vodka
I just need to go home and pray to not be brought up
Now i feel as Empty and breakable as a vase made of glass
I feel my only happiness and peace go away in a dash

Help me God I think im schizophrenic
I think I need to be put in a Mental Clinic
Is it that or do i just need a Paramedic
Either way im a fuckin loonic

I was born and raised as a kid unpraised
Never looked at or got any appreciate
Nobody wanted to say hello or smile at the kid who streets
And everyday got blisters on his feet and missing teeth

I hope one day i could at least i find a real genuine chick
Who loves for what i could give
Rather than my dick

Or at least a real friend of mine to call my own
But hey who knows
It might be soon
Now i gotta go back
And presume what i usually do

END OF POEM

sorry if u guys didnt like it lol im not much of a poet or have too much experience
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  • +2 sydney August 17, 2009 19:37:48
    sydney
    hey, its pretty good=)....its sort of a unique style and the poem itself is unique...not too many ppl write about stuff like that=)
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    Hilary August 23, 2009 06:41:06
    Hilary
    That was realy good poem!
  • PandaBo... Hilary August 24, 2009 05:15:54
    PandaBoo Bear <3
    thank u :)
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    Hilary PandaBo... August 29, 2009 21:12:02
    Hilary
    Your welcome. :)
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    Jesse August 17, 2009 19:55:29
    Jesse
    Ahhh!!! i like it alott.
    :p
  • PandaBo... Jesse August 17, 2009 19:57:33
    PandaBoo Bear <3
    hooray! thanks :)
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    Jesse PandaBo... August 17, 2009 19:59:29
    Jesse
    lol anytime
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    sydney August 17, 2009 19:37:48
    sydney
    hey, its pretty good=)....its sort of a unique style and the poem itself is unique...not too many ppl write about stuff like that=)
  • PandaBo... sydney August 17, 2009 19:44:46
    PandaBoo Bear <3
    thanks! :) thats the best comment ive gotten on this lol :)
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    sydney PandaBo... August 17, 2009 21:47:38
    sydney
    lol,no problem=)
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    Revolution August 17, 2009 01:28:11
    Revolution
    Huh. You like to curse a lot don't you?
  • PandaBo... Revolution August 17, 2009 01:29:34
    PandaBoo Bear <3
    its natural for me :)
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    Revolution PandaBo... August 17, 2009 01:31:08
    Revolution
    Not the best I've ever read but it's all right.
  • PandaBo... Revolution August 17, 2009 01:34:19
    PandaBoo Bear <3
    lol well im a beginner im not like all those poets who have written poems for years
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    Revolution PandaBo... August 17, 2009 01:35:01
    Revolution
    Yup, Im a fan of Lewis Carroll myself, try reading some of his stuff, it's a little cleaner. :)
  • PandaBo... Revolution August 17, 2009 01:37:15
    PandaBoo Bear <3
    haha well i dont know him, but i'll look him up :) ya im kind of a sloppy person wen it comes to stories and such...alot of people hate the poems i write that r usually bout sad crap or stuff like this, but i have a large imagination and i write whats on my mind
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    Revolution PandaBo... August 17, 2009 01:39:37
    Revolution
    Not sloppy, I mean, well...dirty. I mean, that had a terrible plot. I very sorry but this is constructive criticism. And most poetry lovers like myself don't like cussing every other line. :\
  • PandaBo... Revolution August 17, 2009 01:44:38
    PandaBoo Bear <3
    ya and thats why i put up the caution sign, i know many people wudnt like this poem but i didnt care, im down for constructive criticism, but anywhere beyond that isnt acceptable, just look below and see what jazmine said bout it after she said its a bad example for kids. But like i said there r different poets in the world who have different interests and write bout different things, im a little different lol
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    Revolution PandaBo... August 17, 2009 01:45:32
    Revolution
    Lewis Carroll wrote for children. I just find his downright amusing. He's the guy who wrote Alice in Wonderland you know.
  • PandaBo... Revolution August 17, 2009 01:46:37
    PandaBoo Bear <3
    I love alice in wonderland :)
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    Revolution PandaBo... August 17, 2009 01:47:33
    Revolution
    The caterpillar was smoking opium (forgot how to spell) out of a bong

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