A rap or poem I guess...what do you think?

Please note that the following is not true in any way, and that I try to censor as much as I can. But after all, this is a rap/poem of how it seems people have benn feeling lately. I would also like to thank everyone here, and everyone in my life, for inspiring me to write this. I actually thought this up while on my way to class.

My eye's black and blue
I got gum on my motherfuck'n shoe
shoe
shoe
My girlfriend is a dude
The people are so rude
Things these days made so crude
I'm not in a good mood
Get home and food's rotten
Memories people had of me, forgoten

That's just the beginning I guess...I'm hoping to expand it.