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As Devin settled into her new home she was now convinced that she had made the right choice for her family but not the baby inside of her.She knew as soon as the baby was born she was giving it up for adoption.She wouldnt risk her childs life. She didn't even want to think of names for the baby. She just wanted to give birth and protect her child and find a nice family for the baby. And watch from a distance just incase.She promised herslef that if any danger came to her baby after the baby was born she was going to take the baby and run again.








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  • Silent Bob 2012/07/26 21:09:18
    Silent Bob
    I like it!
    My question is though, why are they so short? I can see a sort of pattern of where you're keeping the reader suspicious and wanting to read more, but I really would love to read more, you know? :)
  • Idc any... Silent Bob 2012/08/06 06:47:10
    Idc anymore
    +1
    thanks
    theyre short becuz im going through a block and not comping up with any ideas
  • Silent Bob Idc any... 2012/08/06 23:59:44
    Silent Bob
    OMG I know what you mean! Best of luck! Can't wait to read more! :D
  • Idc any... Silent Bob 2012/08/18 04:36:41
    Idc anymore
    thanks