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Who said Poetry is Boring? - Try this fun exercise!

ASKING FOR A TWO-LINE RHYME
WITH THE MOST ROMANTIC FIRST LINE,
AND THE LEAST ROMANTIC SECOND LINE:
(A few examples below from the Washington Post competition.)

1. My darling, my lover, my beautiful wife:
Marrying you has screwed up my life.

2. Kind, intelligent, loving and hot;
This describes everything you are not.

3. I thought that I could love no other
-- that is until I met your brother.

4. I want to feel your sweet embrace;
But don't take that paper bag off your face.

5. I love your smile, your face, and your eyes
Damn, I'm good at telling lies!

6. What inspired this amorous rhyme?
Two parts vodka, one part lime.
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  • +2 raves Lyana November 05, 2009 11:53:35
    Lyana
    You made promises of love and to never make me cry
    That is until you left me high and dry
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  • +1 raves
    bruce November 07, 2009 22:49:36
    bruce
    i'm not a poet but i'll pass this on.
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    Lyana November 05, 2009 11:53:35
    Lyana
    You made promises of love and to never make me cry
    That is until you left me high and dry
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    Annette Lyana November 05, 2009 13:12:52
    Annette
    good one! thanks
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    Lyana Annette November 05, 2009 21:19:16
    Lyana
    Haha no problem ^_^
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    Whitese7en "by JESUS blood ... November 05, 2009 07:15:10
    Whitese7en
    This is difficult!

    But here goes nothing.

    My lover, my wife, my broken heart did you mend.
    Until the night I walked in on you with my best friend.
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    Annette Whitese... November 05, 2009 13:12:37
    Annette
    Very good!
    See it wasn't that hard.
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    Whitese... Annette November 05, 2009 13:18:37 (edited)
    Whitese7en
    Thank you Annette!! That was fun ...and challenging.

    And for the record, that never happened.
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    Annette Whitese... November 05, 2009 14:03:47
    Annette
    LOL - but it was exactly what was asked for - great post thanks.

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