Which poem should i submit for a contest?

by Raven Oktober Posted 2012/09/05 11:14:38

Related Topics: Infected, Money, Poetry, Contest, poem, Birds, Prize

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I’m trying to decide which poem I should submit for a poetry
contest, and so far I’ve narrowed it down to six. There are cash prizes & I
could really use the money. I’d appreciate it if you’d tell me which one of
these you think would stand the best chance of winning

1-
http://www.poemhunter.com/poem/autotuned-anomaly/

2-
http://www.poemhunter.com/poem/infected-paradise/

3-
http://www.poemhunter.com/poem/misguided-birds/

4-
http://www.poemhunter.com/poem/empires-fall/

5-
http://www.poemhunter.com/poem/sentient-slaughter/

6-
http://www.poemhunter.com/poem/r-r-working-title/

Thank you! J

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die Küss der Tod 2012/09/06 03:36:27

5

I could see myself writing quite similarly to your poems and you have a very powerful grasp of language. You sound very passionate from your tones and I like that. I think that 5 is my favorite, though, just because I liked the last line about the 'slaughterhouse screams'. That being said, I also loved number 6. I think you're a good poet, so keep on writing :)

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Flip-182 2012/09/06 03:17:13

2

I also liked number 4.

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stevmackey 2012/09/06 01:47:45

4

4 and 6 are both good. Six is probably your best.

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AndrewTally 2012/09/05 14:31:11 (edited)

2

Infected paradise - fantastic, very well written.

If you like petry, try this by Irish hunger striker Bobby Sands

http://www.poemhunter.com/poe...

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Jackie G - Poker Playing Pa... 2012/09/05 12:56:05

6

#6 is the best

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Golanv (Raven) BN0 2012/09/05 11:48:54

5

I like #6 as well but I believe #5 has a better chance of winning. Good luck!

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Pitaya (Dragon Fruit) 2012/09/05 11:26:29

6

They're all a bit sad and pessimistic..but I like 6!It's good.

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justagudguy~PWCM~JLA 2012/09/05 11:19:39