Need some feedback.
Zombie Valentine
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For a while I've been working on a short erotic writing. I normally don't write erotic things, so I need some feedback. The site I posted it on has changed a lot and I don't have as many viewers as I once did. This writing is pretty graphic though, so please, only 18+ readers. :)
Read More: http://allpoetry.com/poem/9996881-Playing_with_Dea...
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