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If someone penned a poem about your baby would you appreciate their thoughts, never bring it up ever, or toss in the garbage can?

txtumlin 2012/05/30 07:03:46
"I I would be honored to have someone write a poem about my baby
It's childish, stupid and 3rd Grade level
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My cherub is in my thoughts all day,
especially when I go to pray,
that God will keep his tiny ears closed to ugliness, cursing and violence posed.

His twenty-one months on earth is short,
he's learning his world is mostly sport.
Pushing himself to do all those things that having a big, baby boy brings.

He is running now to play and tease,
he's trying to say, 'thank you' and 'please'.
Sucking his thumb, hard habit to break but, he'll stop it for some kind of cake.

He's quick to grin and giggle too,
not always doing what he's told to do!
It's forever playtime, naps are bad; this sweet little boy is rarely mad.

Good-natured, healthy and studies all,
He never cries when he'll trip and fall,
He understands what we say to him, but prefers to grunt and point his whim!

Playing with small toys that were his Dad's.
He has all the latest, newest fads.
Loves to play with boxes and bags . . .
or 'oohs and ahhs' the nearest mag.

Adam's love is pure and kisses sweet,
time spent with him is a special treat.
He's quick to learn, many times over . . .
Angels nearby silently hover.

His Love far exceeds the love we know,
By loving Him true, we plant and grow.
Sow the seeds of forgiveness and love, Adam's rewards from his God above.

Happy, healthy, . . . heaven will favor, this child the knowledge of his Savior.
He'll grow to treat all folks with respect,
even those close, whose life's a wreck.

He'll know his Christ can ease their load and point to Scripture that tells of Job.
This man-child is from the Most High God, to which he will Pray and Praise and Laud.

My precious cherub is God's Child first.
We love him so much our hearts could burst.
Fix his parents, Jesus, so they'll know, that what they each reap is what they sow.

He's worth all Solomon's gold and jewels,
Keep Adam safe from vipers and fools.
May his small spirit discern the bad
dynamics, . . . that would make him sad.

Whisper Your wisdoms into his ear;
make Your knowledge in him clear.
Allow him to talk with special speech,
Presence within his young body's reach.

We know in our heart, You've a grand plan,
First one being a good Christian man.
Trusting his God no matter the cause,
Knowing this Adam obeys His Laws.

He will sin, fall back, but get straight up,
Bow his head when church passes The Cup,
Will cheerfully give money to God,
Now on Paw-Paw for a wink and nod.

Give us the tools to love Adam more.
Well always affirm his 'Jesus-core'
He'll be that student, soldier and son
that Jesus died for, our saved grandson.

This was scratched out 5/23/12, while waiting on my Gold Card application. Adam was in the car under a shade tree waiting with Paw-Paw and these verses just spilled into
my spirit.


Went to see my son in rehab (5/27/12) and included a copy of this poem for him to read private. Gave Adam's mother a copy on the 24th and I have not heard ONE word from her. Yeah, I guess it does hurt my feelings a little bit and probably shouldn't.

But I'm only a human gran-Mo and I wonder why she hasn't acknowledged it. When I spoke to my son about it, he said it was good and, ya know,(silence . . .) I asked, what hun, you love me?" He goes, "yeah, but that's not it." Then I knew and I tenderly
asked him if it made him cry.

He replied softly, "Yes, Mom, it did." My spirit soared the rest of the night.

My question is, what's wrong with my DIL?










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  • D.C.Verdone 2012/05/30 14:22:29
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    I don't understand what the question is but the poem was very well thought out and beautiful.

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  • Brian 2012/06/05 01:29:52
    "I I would be honored to have someone write a poem about my baby
    Brian
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    I loved it, thank you for sharing.
    All the blessings to your grandson and his mom and dad.
  • txtumlin Brian 2012/06/07 23:52:20
    txtumlin
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    Thanks for your Vote and the blessings.
  • LittleMistersMom 2012/05/31 19:28:20
    "I I would be honored to have someone write a poem about my baby
    LittleMistersMom
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    Very sweet! When Little Mister was born, several of my students made me mementos, and I still have them!
  • txtumlin LittleM... 2012/05/31 22:46:29 (edited)
    txtumlin
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    How darlin'! You will never throw them away. They are PRICELESS!

    Thanks for your Vote and comment.
  • Angela Chambers 2012/05/30 17:38:20
    "I I would be honored to have someone write a poem about my baby
    Angela Chambers
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    Very sweet :)
  • D.C.Verdone 2012/05/30 14:22:29
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    D.C.Verdone
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    I don't understand what the question is but the poem was very well thought out and beautiful.
  • txtumlin D.C.Ver... 2012/05/30 14:26:40
    txtumlin
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    The question was if some did that for your baby would you appreciate it, never bring it up or toss it in the trashcan?

    Thank you for the sweet words about the poem!
  • D.C.Ver... txtumlin 2012/05/30 14:30:31
    D.C.Verdone
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    If it was someone I didn't know I would be a little weirded and show them them when they are older. If it was someone I know I would definitly show them, probably laminate it and put it in their room but that's just me.
  • txtumlin D.C.Ver... 2012/05/30 15:58:59
    txtumlin
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    That's a sensible answer! :D I like the laminating and hanging part!:D

    Thanks DC
  • SA 2012/05/30 13:27:24
    "I I would be honored to have someone write a poem about my baby
    SA
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    I have a few friends that write and enjoy poetry. It helps them voice their thoughts.
  • txtumlin SA 2012/05/30 13:59:07
    txtumlin
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    Thank you
  • twilight freak 2012/05/30 11:36:46
    "I I would be honored to have someone write a poem about my baby
    twilight freak
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    I write poetry so I'm a little bi-es ( i don't know how to spell that word) but I think its sweet when a person puts there heart into word to me it's beautiful ( like I said I write poetry to so I may not be the best person to ask LOL)
  • txtumlin twiligh... 2012/05/30 13:59:34 (edited)
    txtumlin
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    Thank you. That would be 'bias'. :) You are the perfect person to ask!
  • twiligh... txtumlin 2012/05/30 20:15:04
    twilight freak
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    thanks I suck at spelling LOL and thanks as well for thinking that
  • AN 2012/05/30 11:22:09
    "I I would be honored to have someone write a poem about my baby
    AN
    +3
    It's such a nice gesture
  • txtumlin AN 2012/05/30 13:59:46
    txtumlin
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    Thank you
  • Gloria 2012/05/30 11:17:57
    "I I would be honored to have someone write a poem about my baby
    Gloria
    +3
    I have a poem & sketch of my baby who is all grown up now.
  • txtumlin Gloria 2012/05/30 14:00:15
    txtumlin
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    How wonderful!
  • txtumlin Gloria 2012/05/30 14:01:07 (edited)
    txtumlin
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    You'll always value that!
  • "I I would be honored to have someone write a poem about my baby
    Jersey Roze ♥Jwon's Cyar'ika ♥
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    From the heart, shows you really care. And I would definitely appreciate that...
  • txtumlin Jersey ... 2012/05/30 14:02:54 (edited)
    txtumlin
    +3
    Thanks, glad the heart part shows!
  • Jersey ... txtumlin 2012/05/30 14:06:59
    Jersey Roze ♥Jwon's Cyar'ika ♥
    +3
    You're welcome ;D...
  • sglmom 2012/05/30 11:07:03
    "I I would be honored to have someone write a poem about my baby
    sglmom
    +2
    A GIFT of the heart ..
    would be truly appreciated indeed ..
  • txtumlin sglmom 2012/05/30 14:22:45
    txtumlin
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    Thank you ma'am.
  • stevmackey 2012/05/30 11:03:49
    "I I would be honored to have someone write a poem about my baby
    stevmackey
    +3
    Poems from the heart.
  • txtumlin stevmackey 2012/05/30 14:23:19
    txtumlin
    +2
    Thank you Mr. Mackey!

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