70 X 7th Time by Diaverde08

raves +1   by diaverde08-[SHTPP]-Paul2012
All right. This is a poem I wrote a while ago. It was never realy directed toward anyone I knew, but I had been listening to Linkin Park a lot and Mike Shinoda's lyrics influenced me.

I hope everyone likes it.

70 X 7th Time:

I use to be able to tolerate your flaws
When you criticize me when my confidence falls
I try to give you some slack, but I’m against the wall
I saw what I saw
And all in all
This is the last straw.

The seventy time’s seventh time
Has compelled me to write this rhyme
Pack up you apology and regret
I’ll forgive you for the last time, but I won’t forget.

You lack of improvement makes me worry
Though every time you try to say sorry
Every time I forgive you it’s the same story
I guess I’m sorry too. See you in Purgatory.

We use to be cool, you were a friend
But now your offenses are making me feel pinned
And it’s getting harder to bare it and grin
I never held a grudge against your sin
But each time I get over it, you hurt me again

The seventy time’s seventh time
Has compelled me to write this rhyme
Pack up you apology and regret
I’ll forgive you for the last time, but I won’t forget.

So it’s over now, nothing left to say
I won’t put up with you another day
You’re the reason I’m in such disarray
So obey
Don’t’ delay
To get away
Let me know when you’re ready to change your way
But for now, don’t even try to stay
I’m not gonna listen to you beg and pray
For me to give you another chance
Every chance you get you use to advance
Before I can even take a stance
And it only enhances my distrust in your glance
That you have right before you prance

The seventy time’s seventh time
Has compelled me to write this rhyme
Pack up you apology and regret
I’ll forgive you for the last time, but I won’t forget.

Now I’m done trying to repair the trust you tore.
Dealing with your problems only made me sore
Is this what you where aiming for?
You shot, you scored. I’m out on the floor.
Find some body else to wage your war
You’re not my problem anymore.

The seventy time’s seventh time
Has compelled me to write this rhyme
Pack up you apology and regret
I’ll forgive you for the last time, but I won’t forget.
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  • raves +1   [-] by Cookie Bone
    Very good. You may not have intended for it to be directed towards anyone you knew, but it sounds like you wrote it for someone I knew.
  • raves +1   [-] by Sweetness {SHTPP}
    thats awesome
    man i can't believe how many rhymes you can find!!
    i just sort of write and hope it turns out in an ok format...
    nicely done
    =)
  • raves +1   [-] by desi
    its good i like it