That I Believe in You

raves +15   by Tommy Trend
my eyes are open
I see you
can you see me
the real me
without distraction
hiding behind these words
not so smart after all
because I outsmarted myself

waiting on you to set me free
was it just a dream?
or real?
something that I know to be true

beyond these games we play with our love
wishing to tell you how I really feel
but never could
never safe
never secure in myself

these thoughts drive me away from you
you keep coming back to me
I am resigned to be with you
you know my heart better than anyone

so I look upon you anew
your beauty calms my soul
we touch
it is enough
that I believe in you
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  • raves +2   [-] by Mollydolly
    TT too beautiful. You continue to touch my heart. Thank you for this. Even better second time around. big hugs
  • raves +3   [-] by ARoomWithAMoose
    Tommy, why do you always make me cry? =( Beautiful.
  • raves +3   [-] by Shelvis
    GREAT ONE TOMMY!
  • raves +3   [-] by Ben Dare
    strong, tommy , strong!
  • raves +3   [-] by shy
  • raves +2   [-] by Mollydolly
    Ok I'm teary now. Thanks TT yet another wonderful poem
  • raves +3   [-] by Marky
    Beautiful as usual, Tommy!! GET THEM COPYRIGHTED!! :-)

    Marky :o)
  • raves +2   [-] by SHORTTALL69
    NOW THAT IS ONE BEAUTIFUL POEM!!!I REALLY LIKE IT.....KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK!!!ONE OF THESE DAYS I'M BOUND TO SEE A BOOK OR TWO OF POETRY IN THE BOOKSTORES!!! AND.... THE AUTHOR WIII BE YOU!!!
  • raves +2   [-] by ShineFloyd [Ninja]™ Chi-Kung
    another very good one!!!
    congrats my friend!
  • raves +4   [-] by CampDavid
    That is your best since I have been here at SH Tommy. I love seeing this more confident & focused side of you! A+
  • raves +3   [-] by BeaverGunns
    WOW~! Another awesome one!!!! Now THAT'S poetry!!
  • raves +3   [-] by Suicide is Painless
    Aw, Tommy your poems just make my night <3
    Thanks for posting =)
  • raves +2   [-] by RubyTuesday
    moderated...
  • raves +5   [-] by Tiki ~Let Freedom Ring~
    beautiful! thanks for sharing.