That I Believe in You
my eyes are open
I see you
can you see me
the real me
without distraction
hiding behind these words
not so smart after all
because I outsmarted myself
waiting on you to set me free
was it just a dream?
or real?
something that I know to be true
beyond these games we play with our love
wishing to tell you how I really feel
but never could
never safe
never secure in myself
these thoughts drive me away from you
you keep coming back to me
I am resigned to be with you
you know my heart better than anyone
so I look upon you anew
your beauty calms my soul
we touch
it is enough
that I believe in you
I see you
can you see me
the real me
without distraction
hiding behind these words
not so smart after all
because I outsmarted myself
waiting on you to set me free
was it just a dream?
or real?
something that I know to be true
beyond these games we play with our love
wishing to tell you how I really feel
but never could
never safe
never secure in myself
these thoughts drive me away from you
you keep coming back to me
I am resigned to be with you
you know my heart better than anyone
so I look upon you anew
your beauty calms my soul
we touch
it is enough
that I believe in you
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raves +2 posted Sep 25, 2008 12:08AM GMT (edited)
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TT too beautiful. You continue to touch my heart. Thank you for this. Even better second time around. big hugs -
raves +3 posted Sep 24, 2008 05:53PM GMTTommy, why do you always make me cry? =( Beautiful.
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raves +3 posted Sep 24, 2008 03:20PM GMTGREAT ONE TOMMY!
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raves +3 posted Sep 24, 2008 01:20PM GMTstrong, tommy , strong!
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raves +3 posted Sep 24, 2008 07:55AM GMT
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raves +2 posted Sep 24, 2008 07:12AM GMTOk I'm teary now. Thanks TT yet another wonderful poem
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raves +3 posted Sep 24, 2008 03:43AM GMTBeautiful as usual, Tommy!! GET THEM COPYRIGHTED!! :-)
Marky :o) -
raves +2 posted Sep 24, 2008 02:49AM GMTNOW THAT IS ONE BEAUTIFUL POEM!!!I REALLY LIKE IT.....KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK!!!ONE OF THESE DAYS I'M BOUND TO SEE A BOOK OR TWO OF POETRY IN THE BOOKSTORES!!! AND.... THE AUTHOR WIII BE YOU!!!
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raves +2 posted Sep 24, 2008 02:29AM GMTanother very good one!!!
congrats my friend! -
raves +4 posted Sep 24, 2008 02:26AM GMTThat is your best since I have been here at SH Tommy. I love seeing this more confident & focused side of you! A+
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raves +3 posted Sep 24, 2008 02:24AM GMTWOW~! Another awesome one!!!! Now THAT'S poetry!!
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raves +3 posted Sep 24, 2008 02:03AM GMTAw, Tommy your poems just make my night <3
Thanks for posting =) -
raves +2 posted Sep 24, 2008 01:59AM GMTmoderated...
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raves +5 posted Sep 24, 2008 01:52AM GMTbeautiful! thanks for sharing.
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