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I Will Protect You My Love

raves +21   by Jen**GPAC** posted Sep 19, 2008 03:08PM GMTSeptember 19, 2008 15:08:56
Your eyes have darkened my love
to the cold dark place that makes you low
I will protect your heart my love
until the warm kind rays of sunshine
reclaim your saddened soul

You spirits need nestling my love
come lay by my side
I will protect your mind my love
until I am assured you will be ok

Your arms seem lost and limp
let me drape you with my own
I will protect your body my love
My embrace will be your home
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  • raves +1   [-] by Daken posted Oct 01, 2008 08:20PM GMTOctober 01, 2008 20:20:01
    Daken reply
    That was simply beautiful Jen.
  • raves +1   [-] Jen**GPAC** replied to Daken Oct 01, 2008 08:20PM GMTOctober 01, 2008 20:20:50
    Jen**GPAC** reply
    aww thank you Daken.. I am always glad to hear you like my stuff..
  • raves +1   [-] Daken replied to Jen**GPAC** Oct 01, 2008 08:22PM GMTOctober 01, 2008 20:22:44
    Daken reply
    This one just stands out so much, it's shorter then others you've written but doen with such emotion. I loved it. It should be on something, like those beuatifully written cards people give their loved ones. I'm in awe of it. Excellent Jen.
  • raves +1   [-] Jen**GPAC** replied to Daken Oct 01, 2008 08:32PM GMTOctober 01, 2008 20:32:46
    Jen**GPAC** reply
    aww *blush* well it's just meant to be as short lived as the moment I was inspired to write it. Thanks Daken..:))
  • raves +1   [-] Daken replied to Jen**GPAC** Oct 01, 2008 08:33PM GMTOctober 01, 2008 20:33:36
    Daken reply
    Of course my friend, as always.
  • raves +1   [-] by lou lou posted Sep 24, 2008 05:10AM GMTSeptember 24, 2008 05:10:12
    lou lou reply
    mmmmmm so bitter sweet
  • raves +1   [-] Jen**GPAC** replied to lou lou Sep 24, 2008 02:15PM GMTSeptember 24, 2008 14:15:02
    Jen**GPAC** reply
    Hi lou lou.. you likey.. (I just love sticking as many l words in my comments to you..heehee)
  • raves +1   [-] lou lou replied to Jen**GPAC** Sep 24, 2008 06:25PM GMTSeptember 24, 2008 18:25:17
    lou lou reply
    hahahhaha
  • raves +1   [-] by Gremlin posted Sep 21, 2008 07:07PM GMTSeptember 21, 2008 19:07:59
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    Wow what a lovely poem..........I´m speechless.......
  • raves +1   [-] Jen**GPAC** replied to Gremlin Sep 22, 2008 02:34PM GMTSeptember 22, 2008 14:34:48
    Jen**GPAC** reply
    Thanks honey..;OP
  • raves +1   [-] by mike posted Sep 20, 2008 02:32AM GMTSeptember 20, 2008 02:32:38
    mike reply
    Very nice!
  • raves +1   [-] Jen**GPAC** replied to mike Sep 22, 2008 02:34PM GMTSeptember 22, 2008 14:34:35
    Jen**GPAC** reply
    thanks mike
  • raves +1   [-] by Florida Keys posted Sep 20, 2008 01:13AM GMTSeptember 20, 2008 01:13:49
    Florida Keys reply
    Wow, so much appetite in passion with your words. You always seem to empathize your words and meanings from your heart... Makes me, want to be with you.....LOL Keep up the good work....
  • raves +1   [-] Jen**GPAC** replied to Florida Keys Sep 22, 2008 02:34PM GMTSeptember 22, 2008 14:34:28
    Jen**GPAC** reply
    aww thanks Flo..lol..;OP
  • raves +1   [-] by Jimmy O. posted Sep 19, 2008 05:04PM GMTSeptember 19, 2008 17:04:15
    Jimmy O. reply
    Beautiful.

    Is this for AB?? LOL
  • raves +1   [-] Jen**GPAC** replied to Jimmy O. Sep 19, 2008 05:09PM GMTSeptember 19, 2008 17:09:32
    Jen**GPAC** reply
    LOL.. thanks.. but no waaay.. "))
  • raves +2   [-] by Mr. T posted Sep 19, 2008 05:03PM GMTSeptember 19, 2008 17:03:20
    Mr. T reply
    it gave me tinglies.. =o
  • raves +2   [-] Jen**GPAC** replied to Mr. T Sep 19, 2008 05:09PM GMTSeptember 19, 2008 17:09:18
    Jen**GPAC** reply
    LOL.. awww :))
  • raves +1   [-] by NattiFan posted Sep 19, 2008 04:34PM GMTSeptember 19, 2008 16:34:39
    NattiFan reply
    very nice
  • raves +2   [-] Jen**GPAC** replied to NattiFan Sep 19, 2008 04:36PM GMTSeptember 19, 2008 16:36:01
    Jen**GPAC** reply
    Thanks.. I am glad you enjoyed it..;O)
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