im mixed up...

raves +2   by jade
feels like the earth was torn from beneath my feet,
my stomach ripped tew shreds.
if not more then just a moment, blood sounds nice.
suicide attempts sound so tempting,
shaking their lives for once.
they care about no one but themselves,
when we die we'll see who burns.
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  • raves     [-] by **Vampire Redefined**
    awesome poem
  • raves     [-] by Charlotte-Toxic.
    awl, first things is that it was AMAZING! and I wish I could write like that. I envy you :D I CARE! Lol. people do and alot of people care about you especially.
  • raves     [-] by pinkpunk isymmbaihibbb (MAMCF)
    braovo braovo
    it was lovely, it was very good.!!
  • raves     [-] by Emi Kay
    People do care, trust me. Sometimes people just loose sight of their priorities, but they will realize soon. Do something good for all of them, make them care about you and the GOOD things you are doing. Suicide is honestly the most selfish thing you could do, and even though it would teach them a lesson, there are a million other ways of getting their attention that don't involve them loosing you.
  • raves     [-] by dAnIeL
    idk about everyone else but i know I CARE.
  • raves     [-] by The Reject
    dont talk like that people must really care about, i dont know you much but i care,
  • raves     [-] by SWCR Surfer4life
    everything will be fine, remember that there are people who care about you.
  • raves     [-] jade replied to SWCR Surfer4life
    thanks. : )
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